Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你重复了考官的问题，没有回答是否小时候有自行车。先直接回答“Yes”或“No”，再补充一两个具体细节，例如几岁开始骑、谁给你买的，或你通常在哪里骑。注意控制在五句话以内。

例: Yes, I had a small red bike when I was about seven. My parents bought it for me, and I used to ride it around our neighborhood with my friends.

提案: 你直接回答了问题，也给出了原因，但“it's”指代不清，建议改为复数“bikes are”；“the worker”应改为“workers”，“will bike”在这里可改为“ride bikes”或“cycle”。“some students and workers”不够具体，可以说明他们骑车通勤或上学，并补充一个相关原因。避免使用填充词“uh”。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and workers. Many people ride them to school or work because they’re affordable and convenient for short trips.

× Yes, I think it's very popular in my country because, uh, some students and the worker will bike.

✓ Yes, I think they are very popular in my country because some students and workers ride bikes.

“Bikes”是复数，因此后面应使用复数代词“they”，不能用单数代词“it”。修改后应为“they are very popular”。

× Yes, I think it's very popular in my country because, uh, some students and the worker will bike.

✓ Yes, I think they are very popular in my country because some students and workers ride bikes.

这里是在泛指骑车的学生和工人，所以应使用复数“workers”，而不是单数“the worker”。泛指自行车时也可说“ride bikes”。

× Yes, I think it's very popular in my country because, uh, some students and the worker will bike.

✓ Yes, I think they are very popular in my country because some students and workers ride bikes.

句子描述的是当前普遍存在的情况，通常用一般现在时“ride”，而不是“will bike”。表达日常骑车时，“ride bikes”也比“bike”更自然。