Part 1
試験官
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
受験者
I'm not sure but if I chok if I chat when he won the very one to have a bite, maybe I can buy with him, buy to him.
試験官
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
受験者
Yes. My co my country have more many more bikes, like you bike.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
スコア: 10.0提案: 回答内容目前难以理解,且有较多重复和不完整的表达。先直接回答“有”或“没有”,再补充一条具体信息,例如谁给你买的、几岁时开始骑,或你通常在哪里骑。注意使用完整句子,避免在句中反复修改表达。
例: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a small bike when I was about six, and I used to ride it around our neighborhood.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
スコア: 20.0提案: 你已经直接表达了肯定观点,但后面的句子有语法错误,意思也不够清楚。可以用“Bikes are quite popular in my country”明确回答,再说明人们骑车的原因,并给出一个具体场景。注意主谓一致,例如用“people have/use”,不要说“my country have”。
例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them to work or school because they’re affordable and convenient, especially in busy cities.
× My co my country have more many more bikes, like you bike.
✓ My country has many more bikes, like your bike.
“My country”是第三人称单数主语,所以一般现在时中应使用“has”,而不是“have”。主语是第三人称单数时,注意相应改变动词形式。
× My co my country have more many more bikes, like you bike.
✓ My country has many more bikes, like your bike.
“many”和“more”在原句中重复、搭配不当。表达“多得多”时可以说“many more + 可数名词复数”,例如“many more bikes”。
× My co my country have more many more bikes, like you bike.
✓ My country has many more bikes, like your bike.
“bike”前需要用表示所属关系的形容词性物主代词“your”,不能用作主语或宾语的代词“you”。记住:名词前表示“你的”应使用“your”。