Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer does not address whether you had a bike, and the phrases are unclear in this context. Start with a direct answer, then add one relevant detail, such as who you rode with or where you went. Use a short linking word like “because” or “for example.”

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I usually rode it around my neighborhood with my friends after school.

提案: Your answer does not clearly say whether bikes are popular in your country. Give your opinion directly, then support it with a specific reason or example. Keep the details relevant to cycling, such as commuting, exercise, or local traffic.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in smaller cities. For example, many people ride them to work or use them for exercise.

× Introduce your stuff, your job, still their skin type.

✓ Introduce your stuff and your job, and still mention their skin type.

The final phrase, still their skin type, has no verb and is not properly connected to the preceding ideas. Add a verb such as mention and use a conjunction to connect the items. This correction addresses sentence structure only; it does not change the answer's meaning or relevance to the question.

× Outside the morning.

✓ Bikes are popular outside in the morning.

The original is a phrase, not a complete sentence, because it has no verb. Add a subject and a verb to form a complete sentence. The correction uses the present tense to answer the question about whether bikes are popular.