Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer directly, but avoid repeating the same sentence. Add one relevant detail, such as why you did not have a bike or how you travelled as a child.

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family usually drove me wherever I needed to go.

提案: Use the plural form “they” to refer to bikes, and avoid fillers and repeated words. Give a clear reason and, if possible, add a specific detail about when people might still cycle.

例: No, bikes aren’t very popular in Saudi Arabia because the weather is extremely hot for much of the year. As a result, most people prefer to travel by car, although some may cycle in the cooler months.

× No, it's not popular because the weather in Saudi Arabia is so hot, so we usually use the car.

✓ No, they aren't popular because the weather in Saudi Arabia is so hot, so we usually use the car.

The pronoun 'it' is singular, but it refers to 'bikes,' which is plural. Use the plural pronoun 'they' and the matching plural verb 'aren't.'