Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Вы не ответили на вопрос и заменили слово «bike» на «book», поэтому ответ не соответствует теме. Сначала дайте прямой ответ о велосипеде, затем добавьте одну конкретную деталь, например, когда вы катались или где хранили велосипед. Избегайте повторять вопрос.

例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about seven, and I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.

提案: Вы повторили вопрос вместо того, чтобы выразить своё мнение. Начните с прямого ответа («Yes, I do» или «Not really»), а затем объясните почему и приведите конкретный пример. Следите за повтором слова «bikes».

例: Yes, I do. Bikes are especially popular in cities because they’re an affordable way to get around, and many people use them for their daily commute.

× Did you have Did you have a book when you were a child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The opening question is repeated, which makes the sentence structurally incorrect. Remove the repeated words. Since the examiner asked about a bike, use bike rather than book to match the question.

× Do you think bikes bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

The noun bikes is repeated unnecessarily. Use it once to form a clear, grammatically correct question.