Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 先直接回答过去是否有自行车，并使用过去时：用“had”代替“have”，“bought”代替“buy”。注意“bike”的发音和拼写，不要说“back”；表达年龄时可说“when I was about 10”，表达家人送礼可说“my family bought one for me”。

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was about 10 years old. My family bought it for me as a birthday present, and I loved riding it around my neighborhood.

提案: 开头直接回答“是的，自行车在我的国家很受欢迎”，并用“popular among young people”表达“受年轻人欢迎”，而不是“famous in”。描述骑车时用“ride a bike”，不要用“drive a bike”；补充下班后骑车的细节时，可用“because”或“for example”连接，避免重复和过多填充词。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among young people. Many people ride them around the city after work because it’s a convenient way to get exercise and avoid traffic.

× Yes, I have a back in when I chat about um 10 years old.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was about 10 years old.

这句话描述的是童年时期的经历，应使用过去时。将 have 改为 had，并用 was 表示“当我大约十岁时”。

× This is my birthday and my family buy a back from to me.

✓ It was for my birthday, and my family bought a bike for me.

句子讲的是过去发生的事，因此应将 is 改为 was，将 buy 改为过去式 bought。

× This is my birthday and my family buy a back from to me.

✓ It was for my birthday, and my family bought a bike for me.

表示“家人给我买了一辆自行车”时，应使用 for me。from to me 不能用于表达“为我买”。

× This year is it is very famous in young people.

✓ Bikes are very popular among young people.

原句中 This year is it is 出现了重复且结构混乱的主语和谓语。可直接用 Bikes 作主语、are 作谓语，使句子结构完整清楚。

× This year is it is very famous in young people.

✓ Bikes are very popular among young people.

表示“在年轻人当中”时，通常用 among，而不是 in。

× After the after work they like drive back around the city.

✓ After work, they like riding their bikes around the city.

like 后面可以接动词的 -ing 形式，因此这里应使用 riding。也可以说 like to ride。