Bike— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
受験者
As a matter of the fact, yes, I had one. It was, uh, if I remember it correctly, it was blue and I loved it. I went everywhere with it. There was not a single day that I wouldn't write it, uh, to go to a school, to go to the classes I wanted to make I wanted I wanted to make and uh it's a very
試験官
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
受験者
Yes, they are mostly they are used by boys in comparison with girls, but yes, all of the genders using from every age just use it quite often and it's very popular in my country uh and they use it for everyday use.
評価
総合
Part 1
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
スコア: 42.0提案: Answer directly, then add one or two relevant details. Use “As a matter of fact” (without “the”) and “ride,” not “write.” Avoid repeating yourself, and finish your final thought; the answer currently trails off. You could mention where you rode the bike or how you felt about it.
例: Yes, I had a blue bike when I was a child, and I really loved it. I rode it to school almost every day, and sometimes I used it to visit my friends. It gave me a lot of independence.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
スコア: 55.0提案: Give a clear answer and support it with a specific reason or example. Avoid repeating “yes” and “use,” and use natural phrasing such as “people of all ages and genders ride bikes.” If you compare boys and girls, explain the comparison clearly and avoid making a broad claim without support.
例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially for short trips. People of all ages ride them to school, work, or nearby shops. They’re affordable and convenient, although cycling is more common in some areas than others.
文法
× As a matter of the fact, yes, I had one.
✓ As a matter of fact, yes, I had one.
The fixed expression is as a matter of fact, without the before fact. Learn this phrase as a set expression.
× to go to a school
✓ to go to school
When school refers generally to the activity of attending school, it is normally used without an article. Use go to a school when you mean a particular school building or institution.
× all of the genders using from every age just use it quite often
✓ People of all genders and ages use bikes quite often.
The original phrase does not form a clear grammatical subject: using is left without a suitable structure, and the phrase from every age is awkwardly attached. Use a clear subject, such as people of all genders and ages, followed by the main verb use.
× all of the genders using from every age just use it quite often
✓ People of all genders and ages use bikes quite often.
The response discusses bikes in the plural but later refers to them with the singular pronoun it. Use them for plural bikes, or repeat bikes to make the reference clear.
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