Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答切题，也补充了自行车的颜色和用途，但时态错误较多：谈童年经历时应使用过去时，如“had”“was”“rode”。“take my bike to go hang out”不够自然，可改为“ride my bike to meet up with my friends”。建议先直接回答，再用一两个细节说明自行车是什么样的、你如何使用它。

例: Yes, I had a red bike when I was a child. I often rode it to meet up with my friends in the neighborhood.

提案: 你直接表达了观点，也提到了自行车方便这一原因。不过，“the common bike”表达不自然，可用“bikes”或“bicycles”；“Everyone can take”句意不完整，应说明人们可以骑自行车去哪里或做什么。建议用具体场景支持观点，并减少“uh”等填充词。

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. You can see people riding them on city streets, especially for short trips, because they are convenient and inexpensive.

× Yeah, I have one.

✓ Yeah, I had one.

问题问的是“小时候有没有自行车”，指过去的情况，因此回答也应使用过去时。将“have”改为“had”。

× Actually, it's a red one.

✓ Actually, it was a red one.

这里描述的是小时候拥有的自行车，时间背景是过去，所以应将“is”改为过去式“was”。

× When I were a child, I always take my bike to go hang out with my friends.

✓ When I was a child, I always took my bike to go hang out with my friends.

句子描述过去的童年经历，因此“were”应改为“was”，“take”应改为过去式“took”。注意“I”与“was”搭配；表示过去习惯的动作也使用过去式。

× In the street we can see the common bike everywhere.

✓ We can see bikes everywhere.

这里泛指自行车这一类事物，而不是某一辆特定的自行车，因此应使用复数“bikes”，不能使用单数“bike”。

× In the street we can see the common bike everywhere.

✓ We can see bikes everywhere.

“the”通常用于指双方都知道的特定事物。这里是在泛指自行车，不需要定冠词“the”；可直接用复数“bikes”表示这一类事物。

× Everyone can take.

✓ Everyone can ride one.

这里的“take”表示“拿／乘坐”时需要宾语，但原句没有说明拿什么，句子结构不完整。可改用“ride one”，其中“one”指一辆自行车。