Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答内容有些难以理解。先直接说明小时候没有自行车，再用过去时解释原因；如果想对比现在，可以补充现在是否有自行车。注意说“when I was a child”和“my family was poor”，并删去重复的填充词。可用一到两句清楚、自然地表达。

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn’t afford one. I have one now, though, and I use it occasionally.

提案: 观点明确，也给出了汽车更受欢迎的原因，但“Because”不宜单独作为句子开头；“bike”前需要冠词，比较时可以用复数“bikes”和“cars”。建议把观点、对比和原因连成自然的两句话，并补充一个具体细节，例如人们选择汽车的原因。

例: Not as much as cars, I’d say. In my country, many people prefer cars because they’re more comfortable, especially for long journeys.

× No, I don't have a bike when I'm child because my family very poor now.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family was very poor then.

问题问的是小时候的情况，因此要用过去时：将 “don't have” 改为 “didn't have”，将 “I'm” 改为 “I was”。“now” 表示现在，与过去的语境不符，这里应改为 “then”（那时）。

× No, I don't have a bike when I'm child because my family very poor now.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family was very poor then.

“my family very poor” 缺少谓语动词。描述“家里很穷”时需要系动词 be；结合过去语境，应使用 “was”，写成 “my family was very poor”。

× Because uh, in our country the car is more popular than bike.

✓ In our country, cars are more popular than bikes.

“Because” 引导原因从句，通常不能单独作为完整句子。这里可以去掉 “Because”，直接说 “In our country, ...”，使句子结构完整。

× Because uh, in our country the car is more popular than bike.

✓ In our country, cars are more popular than bikes.

这里是在泛指整个类别的汽车和自行车，通常用复数形式 “cars” 和 “bikes”。练习比较时，可以使用平行结构：“cars are more popular than bikes”。