Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答切题，也给出了自行车颜色和骑车上学的原因，但过去经历应使用过去时，例如 “I had” 和 “I needed”。“I have two bikes. This is one” 表达不完整，建议删去或说明两辆车的区别。减少 “uh” 等填充词，并用一两句补充具体细节即可。

例: Yes, I did. I had a green bike because my school was quite far from home, so I rode it there almost every day. It was my main way of getting to school.

提案: 先直接回答问题，再解释自行车受欢迎的原因。当前回答有较多停顿和重复，且结尾没有完成；“buy bike” 应改为 “buy bikes”，“at a weekend” 可改为 “at weekends”。可以补充一个具体场景，例如人们骑车通勤或周末去公园。

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them to school or work because they are convenient and inexpensive. At weekends, people also enjoy cycling in parks.

× Yeah, when I was a child, I have a green bike because uh my uh school is far from my home, so I need to go to school by bike and I have two bikes.

✓ Yeah, when I was a child, I had a green bike because my school was far from my home, so I needed to go to school by bike, and I had two bikes.

这段话描述的是“小时候”的经历，应使用过去时。原句中的 have、is 和 need 都应分别改为 had、was 和 needed；最后的 have 也应改为 had，以保持整句话的时态一致。

× This is one

✓ This was one of them.

这里继续描述小时候拥有的自行车，因此应使用过去时 was，而不是现在时 is。补上 of them 后，也能清楚表达“这是其中一辆”。

× Of course, because um people uh go to school or uh go to the uh go to work and they always uh buy bike and uh when um they uh went go to uh park uh at a weekend uh

✓ Of course. People go to school or work, and they often buy bikes and go to the park on weekends.

bike 是可数名词，泛指人们购买自行车时，应使用复数 bikes，不能直接使用单数 bike。泛指一类事物时，注意可数名词的单复数形式。

× Of course, because um people uh go to school or uh go to the uh go to work and they always uh buy bike and uh when um they uh went go to uh park uh at a weekend uh

✓ Of course. People go to school or work, and they often buy bikes and go to the park on weekends.

这句话谈的是人们平时的习惯，通常使用一般现在时。原句的 went go 混用了过去式和原形；这里应直接用 go。描述经常发生的事情时，应保持一般现在时。

× Of course, because um people uh go to school or uh go to the uh go to work and they always uh buy bike and uh when um they uh went go to uh park uh at a weekend uh

✓ Of course. People go to school or work, and they often buy bikes and go to the park on weekends.

表示在周末通常用 on weekends，而不是 at a weekend。可以记住常见搭配：on weekends（在周末）。

× Of course, because um people uh go to school or uh go to the uh go to work and they always uh buy bike and uh when um they uh went go to uh park uh at a weekend uh

✓ Of course. People go to school or work, and they often buy bikes and go to the park on weekends.

park 在这里指通常会去的公园，作可数名词单数使用时需要加冠词，因此应说 the park。注意：表示去学校或去上班时，school 和 work 通常不加 the；但 go to the park 要加 the。