Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

練習Part12026-10-29 08:24:49

会話

Part 1

試験官

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

受験者

Yes, I did. I had the a small a small blue bicycle when I was when I was 10. I I wrote it every day afternoon with my friends in in my.

試験官

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

受験者

No, I don't think so. I think. I think electric bike is popular in my country.

評価

総合

総合: 5.0流暢さと一貫性: 5.0発音: 5.0文法: 5.0語彙: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

スコア: 38.0

提案: 先直接回答问题,再用一两句补充自行车的外观和骑车经历。注意使用正确的动词“ride”(不是“write”),避免重复,并补全最后一句;例如说明你和朋友在哪里骑车。

例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bicycle when I was ten. I rode it with my friends every afternoon, usually around my neighborhood.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

スコア: 48.0

提案: 答案前后矛盾:先说“不受欢迎”,随后又说电动自行车很受欢迎。请明确表达观点,并补充具体原因或例子。注意说“electric bikes”,并减少重复。

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially electric bikes. They are convenient for short trips and help people avoid traffic jams.

文法

22: Article errors

× I had the a small a small blue bicycle when I was 10.

✓ I had a small blue bicycle when I was 10.

“Bicycle”是单数可数名词,前面需要一个冠词。这里应使用不定冠词“a”;“the a”重复使用了冠词。重复的“a small”属于口语中的重复表达,整理时删除即可。

22: Article errors

× I think electric bike is popular in my country.

✓ I think an electric bike is popular in my country.

“Bike”是单数可数名词,泛指一辆电动自行车时,前面需要加不定冠词。“Electric”以元音音素开头,因此使用“an”,而不是“a”。

重要語彙

Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
Small— Little; Short; Slight; Inadequate; Foolish
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