Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ξεκίνα με σαφή απάντηση και χρησιμοποίησε σωστή χρονική αναφορά: «when I was in primary school». Για μια παιδική ανάμνηση, χρησιμοποίησε παρελθοντικούς χρόνους, όπως «I got» και «I enjoyed». Απόφυγε την επανάληψη και ολοκλήρωσε την πρόταση αντί να αφήνεις ανολοκλήρωτο το «biking in».

例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was in primary school, and I loved riding around the neighborhood with my friends after school.

提案: Η απάντησή σου είναι άμεση και περιλαμβάνει σχετικούς λόγους, αλλά το «it» δεν ταιριάζει με το πληθυντικό «bikes» και το «our eco friendly solution» ακούγεται αφύσικο. Πες «they are an eco-friendly option» και σύνδεσε τις ιδέες σου χωρίς δισταγμούς, προσθέτοντας ένα συγκεκριμένο παράδειγμα, αν μπορείς.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. They’re a quick and affordable way to get around, and many students ride them because they’re an eco-friendly alternative to cars or buses.

× Definitely when I was saying primary school I I bought a bike I enjoy, explore the areas with my friends and the biking in.

✓ Definitely, when I was in primary school, I bought a bike.

Use in before primary school to describe the period when you attended school. Saying primary school is not the correct construction here.

× Definitely when I was saying primary school I I bought a bike I enjoy, explore the areas with my friends and the biking in.

✓ Definitely, when I was in primary school, I bought a bike and enjoyed exploring the area with my friends and biking around.

The answer describes a past experience, so enjoy should be in the past tense: enjoyed. Keep the verbs in the same time frame as bought.

× Definitely when I was saying primary school I I bought a bike I enjoy, explore the areas with my friends and the biking in.

✓ Definitely, when I was in primary school, I bought a bike and enjoyed exploring the area with my friends and biking around.

Enjoy is followed by a gerund, or verb ending in -ing. Therefore, use exploring rather than explore. Biking also maintains a parallel -ing form in the list.

× Definitely when I was saying primary school I I bought a bike I enjoy, explore the areas with my friends and the biking in.

✓ Definitely, when I was in primary school, I bought a bike and enjoyed exploring the area with my friends and biking around.

The ending the biking in is incomplete and does not form a clear phrase. Use biking around to express the activity clearly, and connect the activities in a complete sentence.