Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời có mở đầu trực tiếp bằng “Yes”, nhưng phần sau khó hiểu và chưa trả lời rõ bạn có xe đạp khi còn nhỏ hay không. Hãy dùng cấu trúc đơn giản: trả lời có/không, sau đó nêu một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể như bạn bắt đầu đi xe khi nào, ai mua xe, hoặc bạn thường đạp xe ở đâu. Tránh lặp từ và dùng các từ đệm như “uh” quá nhiều.

例: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a small blue bike when I was about seven. I used to ride it around our neighborhood with my friends after school.

提案: Bạn đã nêu ý kiến “Yes”, nhưng lý do chưa rõ và có một số cụm từ không tự nhiên hoặc không đúng ngữ cảnh, chẳng hạn “every jungle” và “travel choose”. Hãy giải thích cụ thể xe đạp phổ biến với ai và vì sao, chẳng hạn vì chúng tiết kiệm, tiện cho quãng đường ngắn hoặc phù hợp với học sinh. Dùng một từ nối như “because” hoặc “for example” để liên kết ý.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students. They are affordable and convenient for short trips, such as cycling to school or to a nearby shop.

× Yes, definitely uh, I think I'll try uh will have a buy when I try because uh when we try, we uh always love everything around around our around our and the thing.

✓ Yes, definitely. I think I had a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about a past period, childhood, so use the simple past had rather than future forms such as will have. The rest of the response is unclear, so this correction focuses on the answer that fits the question.

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because, uh, every jungle and everybody want to travel choose, uh, not so far, uh, usually used by for.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because everybody wants to travel, even short distances, and bikes are usually used for that.

Everybody is grammatically singular, so the present-tense verb needs the third-person singular ending: wants, not want. Check the subject of the verb and add -s or -es when the subject is he, she, it, or a singular indefinite pronoun such as everybody.

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because, uh, every jungle and everybody want to travel choose, uh, not so far, uh, usually used by for.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because everybody wants to travel, even short distances, and bikes are usually used for that.

Used for is the appropriate preposition pattern when explaining a purpose. Used by normally introduces the person or thing performing an action, so used by for is incorrect. Use used for that or used for traveling.