Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 问题询问你小时候是否有自行车，应使用过去时，而不是现在时。直接回答后可以补充一个具体细节，例如自行车的颜色、用途，或你常在哪里骑。

例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was a child, and I often rode it around my neighborhood.

提案: 回答基本切题，但“which is very popular”表达不自然；可以直接说“Bikes are very popular”。之后补充一个具体原因或例子，并用连接词让表达更连贯。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. They’re an affordable way to get around, especially in busy cities, so many people use them for short trips.

× Yeah, I have a bike.

✓ Yeah, I had a bike.

问题问的是你小时候是否有自行车，使用一般过去时（Did you have...）。回答也应使用过去时，因此将“have”改为“had”。

× Yeah, which is very popular in my country.

✓ Yeah, bikes are very popular in my country.

“which”通常用于引导定语从句，不能在这里单独代替问题中的“bikes”。直接重复“bikes”作主语，句子更完整、自然；“bikes”是复数，所以搭配“are”。