Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer the childhood question directly, then briefly explain whether you have a bike now. Use “When I was a child” and “bought,” not “brought.” Clarify that your father gave you his old bike, and avoid repeating “bike” unnecessarily.

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. However, I have one now because my father gave me his old bike after he bought a car.

提案: Give a clear answer and support it with a specific reason or example. Replace “wanna bike” with “wants a bike” or “rides a bike,” and use correct forms such as “most households have a bike” and “one of the most popular vehicles.” Avoid fillers and the repeated claim that everyone owns one.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people use them for short trips because they are affordable and easy to park. You can often see students and commuters riding bikes in busy areas.

× When I was child, I didn't have a bike, but right now I have my bike that is provided by my father.

✓ When I was a child, I didn't have a bike, but right now I have my bike that is provided by my father.

Child is a singular countable noun, so it needs an article. Use a before child.

× Yes, almost everyone in my country uh, wanna bike uh

✓ Yes, almost everyone in my country wants a bike.

Everyone is grammatically singular, so the present-tense verb needs the third-person singular form wants. Use wants a bike to express the idea clearly.

× I think maximum amount of the household have bike in their home

✓ I think most households in my country have a bike at home.

Amount is generally used with uncountable nouns, while households are countable. Most is a suitable quantifier here. Use most households to express that bikes are common.

× I think maximum amount of the household have bike in their home

✓ I think most households in my country have a bike at home.

Bike is a singular countable noun and needs an article in this sentence. Use a bike.

× It is one of the popular vehicle that is owned by uh, everyone in my country.

✓ It is one of the popular vehicles that is owned by everyone in my country.

After one of the, use a plural noun because one is selected from a group. Change vehicle to vehicles.