Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 先直接回答是否有自行车，再说明父母何时送给你，以及你如何使用它。注意使用过去时（如 gave、wanted），并检查句子结构和词语选择；“fixable flexible”等表达不清楚，建议换成简单、准确的说法。

例: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. My parents gave it to me for my birthday when I was about six. I used to ride it to school and practise cycling with them.

提案: 明确回答自行车是否受欢迎，并用一两个具体理由展开，例如环保、减少交通拥堵或适合短途出行。注意使用正确的词语（如 cars、emissions、pollution），避免不自然的表达；谈论当前趋势时可用现在时。

例: Yes, bicycles have become quite popular in my country in recent years. Many people choose them for short trips because they are environmentally friendly and produce no emissions. They can also help reduce traffic congestion in busy areas.

× Yes, why was a 16?

✓ Yes, I had one when I was 16.

原句的“why was a 16”缺少清楚的主语和完整的句子结构，也无法自然地回答“小时候有没有自行车”。可以说“I had one when I was 16”，其中“one”指自行车。

× My parents give me a gift

✓ My parents gave me a gift

这句话讲的是童年时发生的事情，因此要用一般过去时。“give”的过去式是“gave”。

× for my birthdays

✓ for my birthday

这里指父母在某一个生日送礼物，通常用单数“birthday”。如果确实指多个生日，才使用复数“birthdays”。

× and is it a bicycle?

✓ and it was a bicycle.

句子描述的是过去收到的礼物，因此应将现在时“is”改为过去时“was”。同时，按陈述语序应说“it was”，而不是疑问语序“is it”。

× They wanted to me to study with them and practice the fixable flexible for take the bikes on go to school.

✓ They wanted me to study with them and practise fixing bicycles so I could ride one to school.

“want”后接“宾语 + to do”，所以应说“wanted me to”，不能说“wanted to me”。原句后半部分的结构不完整；可以用“so I could ride one to school”表达“这样我就可以骑车上学”。

× practice the fixable flexible

✓ practise fixing bicycles

“practice”表示练习时，后面通常接动词的-ing形式，因此应说“practise fixing”。

× Definitely in recent years that will be pretty popular in our country

✓ Definitely. Bicycles have become quite popular in our country in recent years.

“in recent years”表示从过去持续到现在的变化，用现在完成时“have become”更合适。“will be”表示将来，与“近年来已经变得流行”的意思不符。

× so bicycle will be more green

✓ so bicycles are greener

这里泛指自行车这一类交通工具，应使用复数“bicycles”，而不是单数“bicycle”。