Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时先直接说明自己小时候有没有自行车。注意过去时：用“I had”，不要用“they do have”；“很长时间”应说“for a long time”，而不是“ate very long time”。可以补充一个具体细节，例如骑车的地点或用途，并控制在一到两句内。

例: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child, and I kept it for several years. I often rode it around my neighborhood.

提案: 先明确回答自行车在你所在国家是否流行，再解释原因或举例。避免使用不正确的结构“are chose”；可以用“many people choose to…”或“bikes are popular because…”。“去上班”可说“commute to work”，并注意不要在“the”和“their”前后重复使用限定词。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. Many people ride them to commute to work because they are affordable and convenient.

× They do have a bicycle when I was a child and I then ate very long time.

✓ I had a bicycle when I was a child, and I had it for a very long time.

句子描述的是童年时期的经历，应使用过去时。原句中的“do have”是现在时形式，应改为“had”。另外，“ate”表示“吃”，不适合表达拥有自行车；这里改为“had it”。

× They do have a bicycle when I was a child and I then ate very long time.

✓ I had a bicycle when I was a child, and I had it for a very long time.

前半句说的是学生自己小时候的经历，主语应使用第一人称“I”，而不是第三人称“They”。后文用“it”指代前面的“a bicycle”，可以避免重复。

× Most people are chose basically to go to the their workplace.

✓ Most people basically choose to go to their workplace.

这句话描述的是普遍情况，应使用一般现在时。“are chose”不是正确的一般现在时表达；主动句中应使用“choose”。

× Most people are chose basically to go to the their workplace.

✓ Most people basically choose to go to their workplace.

这里表达的是“大多数人选择去上班”，主语“Most people”是做出选择的人，应使用主动语态“choose”，而不是不正确的被动结构“are chose”。

× Most people are chose basically to go to the their workplace.

✓ Most people basically choose to go to their workplace.

“their”已经是限定词，前面不能再加定冠词“the”。因此应说“their workplace”，而不是“the their workplace”。