Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Bạn có mở đầu nhưng chưa trả lời rõ ràng vì có thể bạn muốn nói “bike” nhưng lại nói “back” và “bag”. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp rằng bạn có hay không có xe đạp, sau đó thêm một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể như màu sắc, kích thước hoặc nơi bạn thường đi xe. Chú ý dùng thì quá khứ và cấu trúc đúng: “It made me feel…”, không phải “It make me feels…”.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was red and quite small, so it was easy for me to ride. I often rode it around my neighborhood.

提案: Hãy trả lời thẳng vào câu hỏi bằng “Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.” Không cần nói “my bike” vì câu hỏi hỏi về xe đạp nói chung. Nêu một lý do cụ thể và nối ý mạch lạc; ví dụ, xe đạp có giá phải chăng và phù hợp cho những chuyến đi ngắn. Hạn chế lặp từ và tiếng ngập ngừng; chú ý chia động từ số nhiều: “bikes are” và cấu trúc “they make people feel…”.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. They are relatively affordable and convenient for short trips. Many people also enjoy cycling because it helps them stay active.

× It make me feels comfortable.

✓ It makes me feel comfortable.

The subject it is third-person singular, so the present-tense verb must be makes. After make + object, use the base form of the next verb: feel, not feels.

× Of course the my bike uh, in my country is very popular because it it is umm cheap and umm, well known umm and umm because it make UH0 uh, feel comfortable and relaxed.

✓ Of course, my bike is very popular in my country because it is cheap and well-known, and it makes me feel comfortable and relaxed.

Do not use the before a possessive determiner such as my. Say my bike, not the my bike. The correction also removes spoken fillers and repetition for readability.

× Of course the my bike uh, in my country is very popular because it it is umm cheap and umm, well known umm and umm because it make UH0 uh, feel comfortable and relaxed.

✓ Of course, my bike is very popular in my country because it is cheap and well-known, and it makes me feel comfortable and relaxed.

The subject it is third-person singular, so use makes rather than make. In the causative construction make + object, use the base form feel; for example, it makes me feel comfortable.