Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答开头没有直接说小时候是否有自行车；“I too have a back”和“fought down that”等表达难以理解，影响沟通。建议先明确回答“Yes, I did”或“No, I didn’t”，再按顺序讲述是谁教你、在哪里学，以及学习时发生了什么。注意骑自行车用“ride a bike”，不用“drive a bike”。

例: Yes, I did. I learned to ride a bike by myself in our yard when I was about six. I fell off a few times, but I kept trying. Eventually, I was able to ride it without help.

提案: 你直接表达了观点，也提到了骑车可以放松和锻炼，这是相关的支持细节。不过，“popular in China recently”不够自然，可改为“have become popular in China in recent years”；“mountains in the sea”意思不清楚；描述普遍现象时应保持现在时，例如“they have a good time”。建议用一个具体、清晰的场景补充说明。

例: Yes, I think cycling has become quite popular in China in recent years. Many young people ride their bikes with friends at weekends to relax and get some exercise. Some enjoy cycling along rivers or through the countryside. It’s a fun way to spend time outdoors.

× I too have a back.

✓ I also had a back.

这段话讲的是童年经历，因此应使用过去时。这里的 have 应改为 had。

× I was trying it in our yard with my friends and suddenly I fought down that.

✓ I was trying it in our yard with my friends, and suddenly I fell down.

句子描述过去发生的事情，应使用过去时。表示“摔倒”时，fall 的过去式是 fell，而不是 fought；fell down 后面不需要接 that。

× I think bikes are popular in China recently.

✓ I think bikes have become popular in China recently.

recently 表示“最近”，强调一种近期发生并延续到现在的变化时，通常使用现在完成时。这里用 have become 比一般现在时 are 更合适。

× So they had a good time and also exercise.

✓ So they have a good time and also exercise.

这里是在描述年轻人骑车时通常会做的事情，前文使用一般现在时 ride，因此这里也应使用一般现在时。将 had 改为 have，使时态与前文一致。