Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer directly, then describe your bike with one or two clear details. Reduce fillers such as “um” and avoid the broad, grammatically incorrect claim “all the children have had bicycle.” Use the past tense consistently and say “a bicycle” or “a bike.”

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was green, and some parts of the frame glowed in the dark. I loved riding it around my neighborhood.

提案: Give a clear answer and complete your explanation. Your response begins with “no” but then suggests that people use bicycles often, so clarify whether bikes are popular or not. Use a linking word such as “because” to explain your view, and correct phrases like “use bicycle” to “use bikes” or “ride bicycles.”

例: No, bikes aren’t very popular in my country, especially in my hometown. Most people prefer to travel by car because it is more convenient. However, some people still ride bikes for exercise or short trips.

× I think all the children have had bicycle.

✓ I think all the children have had bicycles.

Bicycle is a countable noun. When speaking generally about bicycles that children have owned, use the plural form bicycles. Keep the verb tense consistent with the original sentence.

× I had a green one, a green with glowing some part of the body.

✓ I had a green one with some glowing parts on its body.

Part should be plural here because some refers to more than one part. Place the adjective glowing before the noun parts, and use its to refer clearly to the bicycle.

× You can they people use bicycle, often and my in my country and in my hometown using of cars.

✓ Unfortunately, no. People in my country and hometown often use cars rather than bicycles.

The original answer combines incomplete and repeated phrases, so it does not form a clear grammatical sentence. Use one subject, people, followed by the verb use and the objects cars and bicycles. This creates a complete comparison that answers the question.

× People use bicycle.

✓ People use bicycles.

Bicycle is a countable noun used here to describe a general habit, so the plural form bicycles is appropriate.