Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer directly, then add one clear and relevant detail. The phrase “and I. Write that in the park” is unclear and grammatically incorrect; explain where you rode your bike instead. Keep the response complete and natural.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it in the park near my home, especially at weekends.

提案: Your opening directly answers the question, but say “bikes are very important” to form a complete sentence. Replace the unfinished, unrelated phrase “When you were a child, you rode” with a specific reason or example, such as how people use bikes in your country.

例: Yes, I do. Bikes are quite popular in my country because they are an affordable and convenient way to travel. Many people use them to commute or run errands.

× Yes, I had a bike when I was a child and I. Write that in the park.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and I rode it in the park.

The answer refers to childhood, so the action should also be in the past tense. Use rode, the past tense of ride, rather than write. Adding it makes clear that the speaker rode the bike.

× In my country, bikes very important.

✓ In my country, bikes are very important.

The sentence is missing the linking verb are between the subject bikes and the adjective phrase very important. Use are because bikes is plural.