Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer directly, then add one specific detail about the bike or where you rode it. Correct the phrase “enjoyed to ride” to “enjoyed riding,” and avoid the filler “uh” if possible.

例: Yes, I had a blue bike when I was a child, and I really enjoyed riding it around my neighborhood. I often used it to visit my friends after school.

提案: Give a clear reason and a specific example. Use “rides” or “ride their bikes,” not “rights,” and replace vague phrases such as “that’s kind of good” with a more precise benefit. Keep your pronouns consistent by saying “people’s health” or “their health.”

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. I often see people riding them to work or to nearby shops, especially in busy cities. They’re convenient and also help people stay active.

× Yeah, I had a bike when I was a child, uh, and I really enjoyed to ride my bike.

✓ Yeah, I had a bike when I was a child, uh, and I really enjoyed riding my bike.

The verb enjoy is followed by a gerund (verb + -ing), not an infinitive with to. Use enjoyed riding.