Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答没有直接回应是否小时候有自行车，而且把“bike”说成了“blue bag”。先明确回答“有”或“没有”，再补充自行车的颜色、购买者或骑车经历。注意关系从句中不要重复宾语代词，例如说“a bike that my parents bought for me”，不要说“bought it for me”。

例: Yes, I had a blue bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me when I was about eight, and I used to ride it around our neighborhood.

提案: 先直接回答自行车是否受欢迎，并用“bikes are popular”保持主谓一致。你似乎想表达自行车是环保的出行方式；可以说“an environmentally friendly way to get around”，而不是“advocated friendly equipment”。减少“uh”等填充词，并用一个具体原因或例子展开。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. They’re an environmentally friendly and convenient way to get around, particularly for short trips.

× Yeah, I have a blue bag which my parents bought it for me.

✓ Yeah, I had a blue bag which my parents bought it for me.

问题问的是你小时候的情况，因此应使用过去时。这里的 have 应改为 had。回答过去的经历时，注意根据时间背景选择相应的时态。

× Yeah, I have a blue bag which my parents bought it for me.

✓ Yeah, I have a blue bag which my parents bought for me.

关系代词 which 已经在从句中充当 bought 的宾语，因此不能再使用 it，否则宾语重复。可删除 it；也可以说 “a blue bag that my parents bought for me”。

× Yeah, it's popular because, uh, we advocated, uh, friendly equipment, uh. Way to go out.

✓ Yeah, they’re popular because, uh, we advocated, uh, friendly equipment, uh. Way to go out.

这里的 it 指代复数 bikes，应改为 they。指代名词时，要确保代词的单复数与名词一致。

× Yeah, it's popular because, uh, we advocated, uh, friendly equipment, uh. Way to go out.

✓ Yeah, they’re popular because, uh, we advocate, uh, friendly equipment, uh. Way to go out.

句子描述的是自行车现在受欢迎的原因，因此一般现在时更合适。advocated 是过去式，应改为 advocate。谈论当前的普遍情况或习惯时，通常使用一般现在时。