Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer directly and add a specific detail, but use natural vocabulary: say “ride” a bike rather than “drive” one, and describe the extra wheels as “training wheels.” Avoid the awkward phrase “an extended two additional wheels,” and use “for fun” instead of “as a fun activity.”

例: Yes, I did. I had a small bike with training wheels, which helped me learn to ride. I used to cycle around my house for fun.

提案: Your opinion and reasons are clear, but “two Wheeler motorcycles” is unnatural; say “motorbikes” or “two-wheelers.” Use the plural “modes” if you mean bikes in general, and make the comparison parallel: “convenient, easy to park, and fuel-efficient.” Also, clarify whether you mean bicycles or motorbikes, since “bikes” can refer to either.

例: Yes, motorbikes are very popular in my country. They’re convenient for getting around busy streets, and they’re usually cheaper to run than cars. Many people use them for their daily commute.

× I had a 2 Wheeler bike that had an extended two additional wheels so that I could drive easily.

✓ I had a two-wheeler bike with two additional wheels so that I could ride it easily.

The article an cannot be used with the plural noun wheels. Use two additional wheels without an article. Also, ride is the appropriate verb for using a bike; drive is generally used for motor vehicles.

× It is one of the easiest mode of transportation as it is convenient, easier to take anywhere as well as cheaper in terms of fuel.

✓ It is one of the easiest modes of transportation because it is convenient, easy to take anywhere, and cheaper in terms of fuel.

After one of the, the noun must be plural because the phrase refers to one item from a group. Use modes, not mode.