Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答直接，内容也包含了年龄、父母送礼和你的感受。不过，“almost at six or seven years old”表达不自然，可以说“when I was about six or seven”；描述骑自行车应使用“ride it”或“practise riding it”，而不是“practised that”。建议补充一个具体细节，例如你和父母在哪里骑车，让回答更生动。

例: Yes, I did. My parents bought me my first bike when I was about six or seven years old. I was thrilled, and I often practised riding it with them in a nearby park.

提案: 回答立场明确，并给出了健康和避开交通拥堵两个理由，结构较好。最后一句中的“shed bike schemes”和“cycling layers”用词不准确，建议改为“shared bike schemes”和“cycling lanes”。也可以加入一个具体场景，例如城市里共享单车的使用情况，使内容更具体。

例: Absolutely. Cycling is quite popular in my country, especially among young people in big cities. They often ride to work or school because it keeps them fit and helps them avoid traffic jams. Shared bike schemes and more cycling lanes have made it even more convenient.

× My parents bought that for me when I was almost at six or seven years old.

✓ My parents bought that for me when I was about six or seven years old.

表示年龄“大约六七岁”时用 about，或用 around；这里的 at 多余且搭配不当。建议直接说“when I was about six or seven years old”。

× I was very happy to receive that gift and then I always practiced that with my parents.

✓ I was very happy to receive that gift, and then I always practiced riding my bike with my parents.

practice 后面表示练习某项活动时，通常接动名词（动词-ing形式），不能用 that 直接代替“骑车”这一活动。建议使用“practice riding my bike”。