Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 先直接回答过去是否有自行车，注意使用过去时，例如 “Yes, I did”。“bag”应为“bike”，“by back”可改为“by bike”。描述过去的习惯时，统一使用过去时；也要补上冠词，如“go to the hospital”。建议用一到两句说明骑车去过哪里，让内容更清楚自然。

例: Yes, I did. I rode my bike quite often when I was a child, usually to the cinema or the hospital with my friends.

提案: 先明确回答自行车是否受欢迎，再用一个清晰的理由或对比展开。避免同时使用“but”和“and”；“bags”应为“bikes”，“coats”应为“because”，“very expensive”前应说明具体是什么贵。可以提到自行车价格较高会让部分人买不起，但不要让理由和观点显得矛盾。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in smaller cities. However, some people still don’t own one because good-quality bikes can be expensive.

× Yes I do and I'm very happy to ride the bag.

✓ Yes, I did and I'm very happy to ride the bag.

问题问的是你小时候是否有自行车，时间背景是过去，因此回答应使用过去时 did，而不是现在时 do。回答过去发生的事情时，要注意让助动词与问题的时态保持一致。

× I usually went to the cinema by back and go hospital with my friend.

✓ I usually went to the cinema by back and went hospital with my friend.

句中的 usually went 描述过去的习惯，因此后面的并列动词也应使用过去时 went，而不是现在时 go。描述同一过去时间段内的多个习惯时，应保持动词时态一致。

× I usually went to the cinema by back and go hospital with my friend.

✓ I usually went to the cinema by back and go to the hospital with my friend.

英语中表示“去某地”通常使用 go to + 地点，因此 hospital 前需要加介词 to。可以记住常见搭配 go to the hospital。

× Yes, I think so, but and some people didn't have bags.

✓ Yes, I think so, but some people didn't have bags.

but 和 and 都是连词，这里同时使用会造成连词重复。表达转折时保留 but 即可；使用连词时要根据句意选择一个合适的连词。