Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答切题，但要注意时态：谈童年经历应使用过去时“had”，而不是“have”。“a bike that it is”结构不正确，可以直接说“a bike from my dad”或“a bike that my dad gave me”。建议先直接回答，再补充一条具体细节，例如自行车的颜色或你骑车的地点。

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My dad gave it to me for my birthday, and I used to ride it around our neighborhood.

提案: 目前回答没有清楚说明自行车在你们国家是否受欢迎，后半句也不完整且意思不明确。先直接回答“是”或“不是”，再用一个具体原因或例子解释，例如通勤方便、价格实惠，或许多人用自行车短途出行。避免使用无意义的填充词，并确保句子表达完整。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially for short trips. They are affordable and convenient, so many people use them to get to nearby shops or work.

× Yes, when I was a child, I have a bike that it is. It is from my dad.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I had a bike. It was from my dad.

句子描述的是小时候的经历，时间在过去，因此应将现在时 have 改为过去式 had，并将 is 改为 was。回答过去的问题时，要保持相关动词的时态与过去时间一致。

× Yes, when I was a child, I have a bike that it is.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I had a bike that was from my dad.

关系代词 that 已经在从句中指代 bike，后面不应再重复使用 it 作主语。可以说 “a bike that was from my dad”，也可以像上一条改写那样拆成两个句子。

× Sure, when I rode on the road uh, the bike is very simple in my country uh, because when we go a little.

✓ Sure, the bike is very simple in my country because we use it when we go a short distance.

句末的 “because when we go a little” 没有表达完整意思，且 because 和 when 连用后缺少完整的主句结构。应补全原因，例如说明短距离出行时会使用自行车；避免以未完成的从句结束回答。