Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer directly, then add one clear detail about learning to ride or using the bike. Use the past tense consistently: say “my father taught me” and “I learned.” Avoid repeating that you enjoyed and liked it; one expression is enough.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and I really enjoyed riding it. At first, I couldn’t ride it, so my father taught me in a park near our home. After a few days of practice, I learned how to balance and ride on my own.

提案: Give a direct answer and explain which types of bikes are popular and why. Avoid sentence fragments such as “other BMX type” and the unclear pronoun “they”; use complete sentences and specific linking words such as “for example” or “because.” Reduce repetition by combining your points into a short, coherent response.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially mountain bikes and BMX bikes. For example, many young people customize their bikes and ride them with friends. I think this hobby is popular because it’s an enjoyable way to exercise and spend time outdoors.

× I didn't know how to ride a bike at first, but my father teach me how to ride one and I've learned.

✓ I didn't know how to ride a bike at first, but my father taught me how to ride one, and I learned.

The sentence describes events in the past, so use the past forms taught and learned. Use learned how to ride one to make clear what skill you acquired.

× There are mountain bikes, small bikes, other BMX type.

✓ There are mountain bikes, small bikes, and other BMX types.

The phrase lists multiple kinds of bikes, so the countable noun type should be plural: types. Keep the items in the list parallel by adding and before the final item.

× Others like the mountain bike.

✓ Others like mountain bikes.

When referring to mountain bikes as a general category, do not use the definite article the. Use the plural noun without an article.