Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 目前回答的意思不够清楚，且“a bag in my child”和“four circles bike”都不是准确表达。先直接回答问题，再用过去时说明你小时候有没有自行车，并补充一两个具体细节。可以说“when I was a child”，以及“a bike with two wheels”。

例: Yes, I did. I had a small bike when I was a child, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood.

提案: 回答切题，结构清楚，也提供了共享单车价格和使用场景等具体信息。注意用复数“bikes are”来表达“自行车很受欢迎”，并将“bike sharing schemes”写作“bike-sharing schemes”。开头的“Of course, yes”略显重复，可以直接回答后接原因。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in large cities. Bike-sharing schemes are affordable and convenient for short trips, so many commuters use them to get to and from metro stations.

× Yes, I have a bag in my child, umm, even memory.

✓ Yes, I had a bag when I was a child, umm, in my memory.

问题询问的是童年时的情况，因此应使用过去时。这里的 have 应改为 had。原句中的 “in my child” 不是正确表达；如果想表达“小时候”，可以说 “when I was a child”。

× It's uh, four, umm, circles bike.

✓ It's a four-circle bike.

bike 是可数名词单数，前面需要加不定冠词 a。这里仅修正冠词和数量词作定语时的形式；表达时可去掉 umm 等填充词。

× Of course, yes, bike is very popular in my country, especially the bike sharing schemes in most cities.

✓ Of course, yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially the bike-sharing schemes in most cities.

这里泛指自行车这一类事物，应使用复数 bikes，并将谓语改为 are。表达“自行车共享方案”时，bike 作复合定语通常用单数形式 bike-sharing。