Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer in the past tense because the question asks about your childhood: use “Yes, I did” rather than “Yes, I do.” The phrases “in my a dozen time” and “road boy can” are unclear, so use simple, accurate language to say how many bikes you had and what types they were. Add one specific detail, such as where you rode them. Keep the answer to two or three clear sentences.

例: Yes, I had two bikes when I was a child. One was a road bike, and the other was a regular bike; they were both made by Giant, a Taiwanese brand. I often rode them around my neighbourhood.

提案: Give a direct answer, then explain the difference between age groups clearly. Use “are” or “ride” for current habits instead of “were,” and say “bikes” or “a bike” rather than “bike” when needed. The final point about public bikes is unclear; explain who uses them or how they are used. Link your ideas with a phrase such as “whereas” or “for example.”

例: Yes, bikes are still quite popular in my country, although fewer young people ride them regularly nowadays. Older people often use bikes to commute, whereas many city residents use public bike-sharing schemes for short trips.

× Yes I do have multiple bikes when I was in my a dozen time.

✓ Yes, I did have multiple bikes when I was a child.

The question asks about the past, so use did rather than do. The phrase in my a dozen time is not a grammatical way to refer to childhood; in this context, say when I was a child.

× I think yes, bikes are definitely popular in my country, but nowadays not too many young people were.

✓ I think so. Bikes are definitely popular in my country, but nowadays not too many young people ride them.

Nowadays refers to the present, so were is the wrong tense here. Use a present-tense verb such as ride to complete the idea.

× Older generations use bike to commute, more use public bikes.

✓ Older generations use bikes to commute, and more of them use public bikes.

Bike is a countable noun used generally here, so it should be plural: bikes. The phrase more of them makes clear that more people use public bikes.

× Older generations use bike to commute, more use public bikes.

✓ Older generations use bikes to commute, and more of them use public bikes.

The original joins two independent ideas with only a comma. Join them with and, or separate them into two sentences.