Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答内容有较多重复和停顿（如“whenever when”“was was”），而且“a couple like me”表达不清，听者难以判断你是否有自行车。先直接回答问题，再补充一两个具体细节；注意使用正确的过去时，例如“had”或“rode”。

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I rode it around my neighborhood after school, and I kept it for several years.

提案: 你似乎想表达自行车不太受欢迎，但“No, I don't see you”不符合此处语境，导致观点不清楚。直接说明自行车是否流行，再用具体原因或交通方式作比较；此外，避免用疑问句结尾，改为完整陈述句。

例: No, I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country. Many people prefer buses or cars because they are more convenient, especially for longer journeys.

× Yes, whenever when I was was a child I had to buy umm, a couple like me for many years.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I had to buy umm, a couple like me for many years.

“Whenever”和“when”在这里重复使用，造成连词冗余；表达“当我还是个孩子时”只需用“when”。“was was”属于口语中的重复，不属于所列语法问题类型，因此不作为单独错误标注。