Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答没有清楚表达你小时候是否有自行车。“当时有”应使用过去时，例如“I had a bike”。避免重复或容易引起误解的表达，并补充一个具体细节，如骑车的地点或用途。

例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was a child, and I often rode it around my neighborhood.

提案: 你表达了“人们更常坐地铁”的观点，但“my country people”不自然；可以说“people in my country”。“payer bikes”含义不清，如果指共享单车，应说“shared bikes”。建议先直接回答，再用具体原因或例子支持观点。

例: Not particularly. People in my country often take the subway because it’s fast and convenient, especially in big cities. Some people still use shared bikes for short trips.

× Yeah, I have a pie.

✓ Yeah, I had a pie.

问题是在询问童年经历时用了现在时“have”，与过去时间不一致。描述童年拥有的东西应使用过去式“had”。

× Then I am a pie.

✓ Then I was a pie.

这句话承接的是童年经历，因此应使用过去式“was”，而不是现在时“am”。请注意，这里只调整了时态；原句中“a pie”的意思与上下文不符，可能是用词或转录问题。

× No, I think my country people usually take the subway instead of taking payer bikes.

✓ No, I think people in my country usually take the subway instead of taking payer bikes.

“my country people”的表达结构不自然。表示“我国家的人”时，应说“people in my country”，即把地点短语“in my country”放在“people”之后。