Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 질문에 먼저 직접 답하고, 자전거를 탔던 시기나 이유를 한두 문장으로 덧붙이세요. 과거의 일을 말할 때는 과거형을 사용하고, 의미가 불분명한 표현은 피하세요. 예를 들어 학교에 자전거를 타고 갔던 경험과 더운 날 불편했던 점을 연결하면 답변이 자연스럽고 구체적입니다.

例: Yes, I did. I used to ride my bike to school, although I didn't enjoy it much on hot days.

提案: 현재 답변은 질문과 관련된 의미를 파악하기 어렵습니다. 먼저 자전거가 자국에서 인기 있는지 'Yes, they are' 또는 'Not really'로 분명하게 답하세요. 그런 다음 인기 있는 이유나 자전거를 자주 볼 수 있는 장소 등 구체적인 근거를 연결어와 함께 덧붙이세요.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in large cities. Many people ride them because they are affordable and convenient for short trips.

× It's not happy because when I was I'm into school, I moved to the bicycle when I go to the school, but I don't like it because there was when someone is very hot and my.

✓ I wasn't happy because when I was in school, I rode my bicycle to school, but I didn't like it because it was very hot.

The answer describes an experience from childhood, so use past-tense verbs: wasn't, rode, and didn't like. Use was for the past description of the heat.

× It's not happy because when I was I'm into school, I moved to the bicycle when I go to the school, but I don't like it because there was when someone is very hot and my.

✓ I wasn't happy because when I was in school, I rode my bicycle to school, but I didn't like it because it was very hot.

Use in school to describe being a student, and ride a bicycle to school to describe traveling there. In this context, the article the is not needed before school.

× It's not happy because when I was I'm into school, I moved to the bicycle when I go to the school, but I don't like it because there was when someone is very hot and my.

✓ I wasn't happy because when I was in school, I rode my bicycle to school, but I didn't like it because it was very hot.

Use I to describe your own feelings. It's refers to a thing or situation, and does not clearly refer to the speaker here.

× It's not happy because when I was I'm into school, I moved to the bicycle when I go to the school, but I don't like it because there was when someone is very hot and my.

✓ I wasn't happy because when I was in school, I rode my bicycle to school, but I didn't like it because it was very hot.

The phrases there was when someone is very hot and my do not form a complete, understandable clause. The correction removes this incomplete ending and expresses the clear idea as a complete sentence.