Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 先直接回答问题，不要重复考官的问题。注意讲过去的经历时使用过去时：将“I have”改为“I had”。可以补充一个具体细节，例如谁给你买的，或你常在哪里骑车。

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought me a small blue one, and I often rode it around our neighbourhood.

提案: 开头直接回答后，用一两个具体理由或场景来展开即可。避免重复词语“bike bikes”，并注意表达为“ride bikes”“go to work”“go to school”。句子末尾“there are have some”不完整，应删除或改成完整表达。建议用连接词组织信息，并控制句子长度。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in large cities. Many people ride them to work or to the nearest metro station because they are convenient and affordable. You can also see lots of students cycling to school.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

句子说的是“小时候”，属于过去的时间，因此动词 have 应使用过去式 had。建议根据时间表达判断时态：谈论过去的经历时，使用一般过去时。

× Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country and every day a lot of people ride bike bikes to go to the work, go to the metro station and go to the school and there are have some.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country and every day a lot of people ride bikes to go to the work, go to the metro station and go to the school and there are have some.

bike bikes 中重复出现了 bike，而且表示人们一般骑自行车时应使用复数 bikes。建议检查名词前是否已有复数形式，避免重复或遗漏复数标记。

× Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country and every day a lot of people ride bike bikes to go to the work, go to the metro station and go to the school and there are have some.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country and every day a lot of people ride bike bikes to go to work, go to the metro station and go to school and there are have some.

表示“去上班”和“去上学”这类一般活动时，通常说 go to work 和 go to school，不加 the。建议区分泛指的工作、上学活动和特指的工作地点或学校；只有特指时才使用 the。

× Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country and every day a lot of people ride bike bikes to go to the work, go to the metro station and go to the school and there are have some.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country and every day a lot of people ride bike bikes to go to the work, go to the metro station and go to the school, and there are some, too.

There be 句型中，be 动词后可以接名词或代词，但不能再接 have。因此应删去 have，改为 there are some。这里 some 指前文提到的自行车。