Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你没有回答考官关于“小时候是否有自行车”的问题，而是把 bike 听成了 bag，并反问考官。先确认关键词，再直接用“Yes”或“No”作答；之后可以补充一两个具体细节，例如几岁时得到自行车、骑车的地点或用途。

例: Yes, I had a small blue bike when I was about seven. I used to ride it around my neighborhood with my friends.

提案: 你表达了肯定态度，但后面的内容是断句，原因没有说完整，因此回答不够清楚。先直接回答问题，再用完整句子解释原因，并补充具体场景或例子；例如说明人们骑车是为了通勤、锻炼，还是方便出行。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they’re an affordable and convenient way to get around. Many people use them for short trips or to commute to work.

× Do you have a bag when you were a child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

句子询问童年时的情况，时间是过去时，因此助动词 do 应改为 did。did 后面的动词要用原形 have。原句中的 bag 与考官问题中的 bike 不一致；修改后的答案已按题目内容调整。

× Yes, because. People.

✓ Yes, because people like riding bikes.

“People”只是名词，缺少谓语动词，不能单独构成完整句子；“because”引导原因从句，也不能在这里单独成句。可将两部分合并，并补充谓语动词，例如“people like riding bikes”。