Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is direct and grammatically correct, but it simply repeats the question and does not develop the topic. Add one specific detail, such as how often you rode your bike or where you used it.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it around my neighborhood after school, especially on weekends.

提案: Give a clear, direct answer and finish your sentence. “Absolutely hot” is unnatural here; say “extremely hot” or “very hot.” Use “people” instead of “citizens,” and make the plural form consistent: “cars and motorcycles.” Add a specific reason or example, and use a linking phrase such as “As a result.”

例: No, I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country, mainly because the weather is extremely hot for much of the year. As a result, many people prefer to travel by car or motorcycle, especially during the daytime.

× From my perspective, I don't think bikes are popular in my country because the weather is absolutely hot. For example, citizens always use cars and motorcycle instead of

✓ From my perspective, I don't think bikes are popular in my country because the weather is absolutely hot. For example, citizens always use cars and motorcycles instead of bikes.

The plural noun cars is paired with motorcycle, so motorcycle should also be plural: motorcycles. Make the nouns agree in number when listing multiple types of vehicles.

× From my perspective, I don't think bikes are popular in my country because the weather is absolutely hot. For example, citizens always use cars and motorcycle instead of

✓ From my perspective, I don't think bikes are popular in my country because the weather is absolutely hot. For example, citizens always use cars and motorcycles instead of bikes.

The sentence ends with instead of, which needs an object to complete the comparison. Add bikes to make the meaning clear and the sentence complete.