Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: You answer the question directly and support your answer with relevant details about who you rode with and how it made you feel. To sound more natural, avoid starting a sentence with “And” here, and try not to repeat or restart “the area.” You could also make the final detail more specific by mentioning a place you explored.

例: Yes, my parents bought me a bicycle when I was seven. I loved riding it around our neighborhood with my friends because it made me feel relaxed and independent. We often explored the small parks and streets near our home.

提案: Your answer is clear, well organized, and supported by relevant reasons. To make it more specific, you could add a brief example of when people use shared bikes, such as traveling from a subway station to work. Avoid using “very” repeatedly by choosing a more precise adjective.

例: Yes, shared bikes are popular in many Chinese cities, especially for short trips to work or school. They’re convenient, affordable, and environmentally friendly. For example, people often use them to travel from a subway station to their office.