Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer directly using the past tense, since the question asks about your childhood. Avoid starting with “Yes, I do” and then correcting yourself; a brief, complete answer will sound more natural. You can add one specific detail, such as how you used the bike.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was a child, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood.

提案: Give a clear answer first, then explain the main reason. The phrase “more populated or more civilized” is unclear and does not support your point; focus instead on heavy traffic or convenience. Use “by bike” rather than “in a bike,” avoid repeated or unfinished phrases, and keep the answer to a few coherent sentences.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in crowded cities. Heavy traffic can make driving a car slow, so many people find it quicker and more convenient to travel by bike.

× Yes I do, had a bike when I was a child, sorry.

✓ Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child, sorry.

The question asks about the past: Did you have a bike? Use the past-tense auxiliary did, not do, in the answer. A complete answer is Yes, I did.

× So travelling in a bike than a car is easy in our country.

✓ So traveling by bike rather than by car is easy in our country.

Use by with a means of transportation, as in by bike or by car. In a bike is not the usual preposition for describing how someone travels.

× So travelling in a bike than a car is easy in our country.

✓ So traveling by bike is easier than traveling by car in our country.

Because the sentence compares the ease of traveling by bike with traveling by car, use the comparative form easier. Make the two things being compared parallel: traveling by bike and traveling by car.

× Yes, in my country bikes are more popular than cars because my country is more populated or more civilized so and it has highly It has heavy traffic, so travelling in a bike than a car is easy in our country.

✓ Yes, bikes are more popular than cars in my country because it is highly populated and has heavy traffic.

The original combines or, so, and, and a repeated clause in a way that makes the connection between ideas unclear. Use and to connect the two reasons, and use because to introduce them. Avoid stacking so and and together.