Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer directly once, then add a brief detail if relevant. Use the past simple for childhood experiences: say “I didn’t have,” not “I didn’t had.” Avoid repeating your answer and fillers, and use the natural phrase “a bike.”

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I usually walked or got a ride from my parents instead.

提案: Your opening answers the question, but the explanation is unclear and contains repetition and fillers. Clarify whether you mean bicycles or motorbikes, and give a specific reason or example for their popularity. Use a natural phrase such as “show off their wealth” only if that is what you mean; otherwise, focus on practical reasons like convenience or affordability.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in busy cities. Many people ride them because they’re affordable and make it easier to get around in traffic.

× No, no I do not.

✓ No, no, I did not.

The question asks about the student's childhood, so the answer should use the past tense. Use did not rather than do not when referring to the past.

× I did not have.

✓ I did not have a bike.

In this context, have needs an object to complete the idea. Add a bike to specify what the student did not have.

× I didn't had any bike when I was a child.

✓ I didn't have any bike when I was a child.

After did not or its contraction didn't, use the base form of the verb. The correct form is have, not had.

× People used to, uh, show show their uh glamorous lifestyle with having uh popular bikes.

✓ People show their glamorous lifestyle by having popular bikes.

The question asks whether bikes are popular now, so use the present tense show. Used to describes a past habit. Also, by having is the appropriate phrasing to express how people show their lifestyle; the repeated show and fillers can be omitted.