Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Yanıtınız sorunun geçmiş zamanla ilgili kısmını doğrudan karşılamıyor; “I don't have a bike” şu anki durumu anlatıyor. Çocukluğunuzla ilgili hatırladığınız bilgiyi belirtin. Emin değilseniz bunu doğal biçimde ifade edip kısa bir ek bilgi verin.

例: I can't remember clearly whether I had a bike as a child. I don't own one now, though.

提案: Soruyu doğrudan yanıtlamanız iyi; ancak “everybody using” yerine “everybody uses”, “everybody have” yerine “everybody has” kullanın. “Everybody” ifadesi aşırı genelleyici ve tekrarlı; bisikletlerin kimler arasında veya neden popüler olduğunu daha somut bir ayrıntıyla açıklayın. Son bölümde “an easy way to get around” gibi doğal bir ifade kullanabilirsiniz.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and people who live near their workplaces. They're an affordable and convenient way to get around.

× I don't know, I don't have a bike.

✓ I don't know; I didn't have a bike.

The question asks about your childhood, so the answer about owning a bike should use the past tense. Use didn't have rather than don't have.

× Yes, in my country everybody using bikes and everybody have a bike and that's really easy way.

✓ Yes, in my country everybody uses bikes, and everybody has a bike, and that's a really easy way.

For a general fact or habit, use the simple present. Everybody using is missing a finite verb; say everybody uses. Everybody is grammatically singular, so use has, not have.

× Yes, in my country everybody using bikes and everybody have a bike and that's really easy way.

✓ Yes, in my country everybody uses bikes, and everybody has a bike, and that's a really easy way.

The singular countable noun way needs an article. Use a before really easy way.