Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答直接回应了问题，但“ I wanna child”以及“I try to how to use”语法不正确，导致意思不清楚。可以说明自己几岁时有了自行车，再补充学习骑车的经历和感受。注意使用过去时，例如“when I was 12”和“learned to ride”；“unforgettable”前可加“an”，或改用更自然的表达“a memorable experience”。

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was about 12. I remember learning to ride it in my neighborhood, and I fell off a few times at first. It was a memorable experience because I eventually learned to ride on my own.

提案: 你的回答表达了明确观点，也给出了电动自行车更常见的原因。不过，“country side”不适合表达“在我们国家”，“e-bicycle”通常说“electric bikes”或“e-bikes”，而“more convenience”应改为“more convenient”。建议先直接回答，再具体说明人们选择电动自行车的原因；同时避免重复使用“because”和填充词。

例: Not really. In my country, electric bikes are more popular than regular bicycles because they are more convenient for commuting. They also help people travel longer distances without getting too tired.

× Yes, I wanna child when I 12 years old.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was 12 years old.

问题询问的是童年时的经历，因此应使用过去时。这里可用“had”表示当时有一辆自行车；描述过去的年龄时，也要用“was”，不能说“I 12 years old”。

× Yes, I wanna child when I 12 years old.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was 12 years old.

“wanna child”不能表达“有一辆自行车”，而且“when I 12 years old”缺少谓语动词。结合问题语境，应说“I had a bike”，并在年龄表达中补上“was”。

× I try to how to use the bicycle

✓ I learned how to ride a bicycle.

这句话描述的是童年时学骑自行车的经历，应使用过去时“learned”。谈论学骑自行车时，用“ride a bicycle”比“use the bicycle”更合适。

× I try to how to use the bicycle

✓ I learned how to ride a bicycle.

“try to”后面不能直接接“how to”；原句的动词结构不完整。可以用“learn how to do something”表达“学习如何做某事”，例如“learned how to ride a bicycle”。

× Actually, I don't think so, because uh in our country side we often um buy e-bicycle, not bicycle, because e-bicycle is more uh convenience.

✓ Actually, I don't think so. In the countryside, we often buy e-bikes rather than regular bikes because e-bikes are more convenient.

这里是在泛指人们通常购买的自行车，应使用可数名词的复数形式“e-bikes”和“regular bikes”。主语也相应使用复数形式“e-bikes are”。

× Actually, I don't think so, because uh in our country side we often um buy e-bicycle, not bicycle, because e-bicycle is more uh convenience.

✓ Actually, I don't think so. In the countryside, we often buy e-bikes rather than regular bikes because e-bikes are more convenient.

“convenience”是名词，不能直接放在“are”后面描述自行车的特点。这里需要形容词“convenient”；比较级结构应为“are more convenient”。