Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答无法清楚辨认，可能没有直接回应问题。请先明确回答“有”或“没有”，再补充一个具体细节，例如几岁开始骑、在哪里骑，或谁教你骑。尽量使用完整且清晰的英文句子。

例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about seven, and my father taught me how to ride it in a nearby park.

提案: 先直接回答自行车在你们国家是否受欢迎；注意使用“bikes”而不是“bags”。后面的原因表达不清楚且有重复，可以说明一个具体原因，例如交通拥堵、骑行方便或环保。使用一两个连接词组织内容，并控制在两到三句内。

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in crowded cities. They are affordable and convenient, and people can use them to avoid traffic jams on short journeys.

× Yes, I think bags are popular in our country because there are many people in our country, so uh when judge our the cars money money cars in the street in the streets so many people

✓ Yes, I think bags are popular in our country because there are many people in our country. There are many cars on the streets.

原句后半部分“when judge our the cars money money cars...”结构残缺，含义不清，无法组成完整句子；同时，前面的 because 从句已经说明原因，不宜再用 so 将后面不完整的内容连接起来。可以先把表达拆成完整句。此处保留了原文中的 bags，因为将其改成 bikes 属于词汇修改，而非指定范围内的语法纠错。