Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

練習Part12026-10-26 22:09:58

会話

Part 1

試験官

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

受験者

Yes I I I have a buy when I have a choice.

試験官

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

受験者

Yes, Sir, and yes I do.

評価

総合

総合: 5.0流暢さと一貫性: 5.0発音: 5.0文法: 5.0語彙: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

スコア: 15.0

提案: Câu trả lời chưa rõ ý do lặp từ “I”, dùng sai từ “buy” (có thể bạn muốn nói “bike”) và chưa dùng thì quá khứ phù hợp với “when you were a child”. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp bằng “Yes, I did”, sau đó thêm một chi tiết cụ thể như thời điểm bạn có xe hoặc nơi bạn thường đạp xe.

例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about eight, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

スコア: 35.0

提案: Bạn đã trả lời đúng trọng tâm nhưng câu bị lặp ý giữa “Yes, Sir” và “yes I do”, đồng thời chưa có lý do hoặc ví dụ hỗ trợ. Hãy dùng một câu trả lời trực tiếp rồi giải thích ngắn gọn xe đạp phổ biến với ai hoặc vì sao mọi người sử dụng chúng.

例: Yes, I do. Bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students, because they’re affordable and convenient for short trips.

文法

Past tense issue (ID 5)

× Yes I I I have a buy when I have a choice.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about a past time, so use the past-tense form had instead of have. Use was in the clause about being a child to keep the sentence in the past. The repeated words are disfluencies, and buy appears to be a transcription error for bike; these are not grammar problems from the provided list.

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