Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear and directly answers the question, but it repeats the wording of the question and gives no further detail. Add a brief reason or a specific memory to make it more engaging, while keeping it concise.

例: No, I didn’t. My family lived in a busy city, so my parents thought it was safer for me to walk or take the bus.

提案: You give a relevant reason, but “bikes, known as the two Wheelers” sounds unnatural and may confuse bicycles with motorcycles. Use the term that matches what you mean, such as “motorbikes” or “bicycles.” Also, “people” sounds more natural than “citizens” here, and “get around” is a natural alternative to “move.”

例: Yes, motorbikes are very popular in my country because they’re an affordable and convenient way to get around, especially when there’s heavy traffic.