Bike— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
受験者
Yes, I have a I had a bike when I was a child and I I I went to very so many places by bike like the park or shopping center with my friends or with my brother. So the bike was one of the ways for me to go so many places when I was a child.
試験官
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
受験者
Yeah, I think bikes are very popular in my country, but the urban area is more popular because uh not so many people have a have their own car, so they always commute or um go somewhere by public transportation or bikes.
評価
総合
Part 1
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
スコア: 58.0提案: 質問には答えられており、友達や兄弟と公園・ショッピングセンターへ行ったという具体例もあります。一方で、「I have a I had」「I I I」などの言い直しが多く、「so many places」も繰り返されています。過去の話なので過去形を保ち、行き先をまとめて簡潔に述べましょう。「For example」などで具体例につなぐと、より自然で分かりやすくなります。
例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it to places like the park or the shopping centre with my friends or my brother. It was a convenient way to get around.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
スコア: 65.0提案: 自転車が人気であることと、その理由を説明できています。ただし、「the urban area is more popular」では何が人気なのかが不明確なので、「They are especially popular in urban areas」と言い換えましょう。また、「a have their own car」などの言い直しや、「always」のような強すぎる表現を避けると自然です。都市部の交通事情を理由として簡潔にまとめてください。
例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in urban areas. Many people there don't own a car, so they often use public transport or ride a bike to get around. Bikes can be a convenient option for short trips.
文法
× I went to very so many places by bike like the park or shopping center with my friends or with my brother.
✓ I went to so many places by bike, like the park or shopping center, with my friends or my brother.
Very cannot be used directly before so many. Use so many places to emphasize a large number, or use very many places. For example: I went to very many places by bike.
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