Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答切题，也提供了骑车上学和在城市里骑行的细节。注意回忆过去时态要保持一致：用“had”而不是“have”；“used it to”后面接动词原形“go”，而不是“went”。避免重复和过多填充词，并用一句简洁的总结收尾。

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it to school, and I sometimes used it to explore my neighbourhood with my friends.

提案: 回答直接，并给出了人们骑车通勤、上学的原因。谈论自行车这一类事物时，使用复数“bikes”；“most of people”应改为“most people”。可以补充一个具体原因，例如骑车方便、经济或适合短途出行，同时减少填充词。

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them to work or school because they’re affordable and convenient, especially for short journeys.

× Well, when I was a child, I have a bike.

✓ Well, when I was a child, I had a bike.

句子描述的是“小时候”的经历，时间在过去，因此应使用过去时。把 have 改为 had，与 when I was a child 的过去时间保持一致。

× I usually used it to, uh, went to my school.

✓ I usually used it to go to school.

used it to 后面要接动词原形，表示“用它来做某事”，所以应将 went 改为 go。此外，go to school 通常不加 my。

× Well, I think in my country, bike is really popular.

✓ Well, I think bikes are really popular in my country.

这里泛指自行车这一类事物，通常用复数 bikes；主语为复数时，be 动词也应使用 are。

× That is because, uh, most of people go to work or go to study by bike.

✓ That is because most people go to work or go to study by bike.

most 后面直接接泛指的复数名词时，不需要加 of，因此应说 most people。若使用 most of，则后面通常要接限定词，例如 most of the people。