Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer the question directly by saying whether you had a bike. Then add one specific detail, such as when you rode it or who taught you. Avoid unrelated comments and fillers like “uh.”

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father taught me how to ride it when I was about six, and I used to cycle around our neighborhood.

提案: Give a clear opinion, even if you are not completely certain. Support it with a reason or a specific example, such as how people use bikes for commuting or exercise.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in smaller cities. Many people use them to commute because they are affordable and convenient, and some also ride them for exercise.

× I uh I have a question how I want to improve my English.

✓ I, uh, have a question about how I can improve my English.

The phrase 'I have a question how I want to improve my English' does not correctly connect 'a question' to the following clause. Use 'about how' to introduce the topic of the question. Also, 'can improve' expresses asking for advice about possible ways to improve. The fillers are punctuated for readability.