Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答内容切题，也补充了骑车上学方便、有趣的原因。注意过去的经历要统一使用过去时：把“have”改为“had”，把“love”改为“loved”。“ride a bike to the school”可简化为“ride my bike to school”；“interesting”也可以换成更自然的“fun”。避免“to be honest”这类不必要的填充语，并用一个具体细节丰富回答。

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it to school because it was convenient and fun. I especially enjoyed cycling with my friends after class.

提案: 你提到了共享单车，例子具体且切题。注意一般情况要用现在时，不能说“you could saw”；可以说“people can scan a QR code”。“rent a bike by your phone”应改为“rent a bike using their phones”，“a very helpful”应改为“very convenient”，“ride into anywhere”可改为“get around”。建议用清晰的因果连接词组织回答。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially shared bikes. People can scan a QR code with their phones to rent one. They’re convenient for short trips, so many people use them to get around the city.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

句子说的是“小时候”拥有自行车，属于过去的情况，因此应使用一般过去时。have 的过去式是 had。

× So to be honest, I love cycling when I was a student because I think it's very convenient for me to ride a bike to the school. Also, it's very interesting to ride a bike.

✓ So, to be honest, I loved cycling when I was a student because I thought it was very convenient for me to ride a bike to school. Also, it was very interesting to ride a bike.

这句话描述的是学生时代的经历，应保持过去时态一致：love、think、is 分别改为 loved、thought、was。

× So to be honest, I love cycling when I was a student because I think it's very convenient for me to ride a bike to the school. Also, it's very interesting to ride a bike.

✓ So, to be honest, I loved cycling when I was a student because I thought it was very convenient for me to ride a bike to school. Also, it was very interesting to ride a bike.

表示“去上学”时，固定表达是 go to school 或 ride to school，school 前通常不加 the。

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because you could saw the bike that you could scan the code and you could rent a bike by your phone.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because you can see bikes that you can scan a code to rent using your phone.

情态动词 could 后面必须接动词原形，不能接过去式 saw。这里描述目前普遍存在的情况，用 can see 更合适；scan 和 rent 也使用动词原形。

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because you could saw the bike that you could scan the code and you could rent a bike by your phone.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because you can see bikes that you can scan a code to rent using your phone.

表示使用手机租车时，by your phone 不自然；可以说 using your phone 或 on your phone。

× So it's a very helpful for people to ride into anywhere.

✓ So it's very helpful for people to ride anywhere.

helpful 是形容词，前面不能直接使用不定冠词 a。删去 a 后，句子结构正确。

× So it's a very helpful for people to ride into anywhere.

✓ So it's very helpful for people to ride anywhere.

anywhere 表示“任何地方”，本身可以直接作地点状语，前面不需要加 into。