Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 先直接回答“有”，再说明家里为什么买了自行车，以及你为什么不常骑。把“in in”“I for me myself”等重复表达和填充词删掉；“because”后需要补充完整原因。若不确定动画的具体类型，可以直接说你哥哥喜欢自行车主题的动画。

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My brother was a big fan of anime about cycling, so our family bought two bikes. I didn’t ride mine very often, though, because I preferred doing other activities.

提案: 回答与问题相关，但需要把理由表达清楚。可以说明香港交通便利、人口密集或道路狭窄，因此骑车不太方便；避免“which”造成的句子断裂，并将“very a small island”和“small rows”改为自然表达，例如“a small, densely populated city”和“narrow roads”。删除不必要的填充词，并用一个具体原因支持观点。

例: No, I don’t think bikes are especially popular in Hong Kong. Public transport is very convenient, and the roads can be narrow and crowded, so cycling isn’t always practical. Some people still ride bikes for exercise or in the quieter areas.

× my brother was very interested in in anime

✓ my brother was very interested in anime

“interested in”中的介词“in”重复了一次。介词短语“be interested in”只需要使用一个“in”。

× I for me myself, I didn't ride the bike a lot

✓ I myself didn't ride the bike a lot

“I”“me”和“myself”在这里重复指代同一个人，且“for me myself”不能这样用。可以直接说“I didn't...”或用“I myself”强调“我本人”。

× I didn't ride the bike a lot because.

✓ I didn't ride the bike a lot.

“because”通常引出原因从句，后面需要补充原因；句子在“because”后结束，结构不完整。如果不继续说明原因，就应删去“because”。

× Hong Kong is very a small island

✓ Hong Kong is a very small island

名词短语的正确顺序是“冠词 + 副词 + 形容词 + 名词”，因此应说“a very small island”，而不是“very a small island”。

× ride in the small rows

✓ ride on the small roads

表示在道路上骑车时，通常用介词“on”，而不是“in”。另外，“rows”应为“roads”（道路）；这是拼写修正，不属于本题列出的语法类型。