Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 先直接回答问题，再用完整句子补充年龄和自行车的特点。注意区分“我大约七岁时”与“我被买了”：可以说“When I was about seven, my parents bought me...”。避免重复词语，并在表达结束后停顿，不要留下未完成的句子。

例: Yes, I did. When I was about seven, my parents bought me a small red bike. I was really excited because it was my first bike.

提案: 先明确表达“受欢迎”或“不太受欢迎”，注意否定形式应使用“not popular”，而不是“no popular”。补充原因时使用完整句子，例如“people are too busy to ride them”，并加入具体背景，让理由更清楚。

例: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country. Many people are busy with work and prefer to drive or take public transport. However, bikes are still common in parks and quieter neighborhoods.

× I got a small red bike when I was bought about 7 years old.

✓ I got a small red bike when I was about seven years old.

“I was bought”是被动语态，意思是“我被买了”，不适合表达年龄。描述年龄时应说“主语 + was/were + about + 年龄”，因此应改为“when I was about seven years old”。

× My my parents bought bought me so I'm.

✓ My parents bought it for me.

原句重复了“My”和“bought”，而“so I'm”没有构成完整句子，导致句意不完整。可以说“My parents bought it for me”（我的父母给我买了它）。回答时应避免重复，并确保句子包含完整的意思。

× I think bikes are no popular in my country because everyone is busy no time by.

✓ I think bikes are not popular in my country because everyone is busy and doesn't have time to ride them.

形容词“popular”前表示否定时要用“not”，不能用“no”，所以应说“not popular”。“everyone is busy no time by”缺少完整的句子结构；可以用“and doesn't have time to ride them”表达“而且没有时间骑车”。